Thrive 20 - Providing feedback and ensuring feedback uptake in design sketching

How can we provide written feedback for sketching to ensure improvement? No way! It does not work.
Feedback for design sketching is better done via sketching. Sketching as a form of feedback.
Take a look at how feedback can be given for sketching
So how much does a video recorded feedback being uptake by a student who is motivated?
A critical lens on feedback uptake

Before feedback


Video recorded teacher feedback
https://www.loom.com/share/42a8c2f209354956a1e26a9d93549156

After feedback



 

Based on my framework of sketching
 
(1) the use of stroke to figure out the shape was not uptook.
(2) the details of slot was done.
(3) the understanding of grain direction was not uptook.
(4) the "perspective" drawing stay as "perspective" without following the isometric demonstrated. 

In conclusion - percentage uptake is about 30%



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